Hoover
A poem
written after watching ‘Domestic Labour: a Study in Love’.
I saw
old fashioned sharp angled pastel coloured hoovers
Cradled
and slung over shoulders and pushed forward ready to clean.
Pop! goes
one hoover and an old tyre explodes
Hoovers
are pointed like guns.
There
are whisks and cafetieres on helmets on heads
An
arsenal here. How does housework advance?
There’s
plenty of awkward bending and switching,
Switching
and bending. Watch out for those wires.
There
are guaranteed interruptions
With the
on switch and the off switch.
Women
who can’t talk to each other or look at each other stand up
Fall
down, dash, chase, rest on their backs and watch their feet do a little dance
Postures
of children and babies break to a heroic stand in goggles by a bike.
There’s
valiant pedalling. Pan and radiator clamp the bike into stillness.
With such
grasping appliances, there’s no getting anywhere.
I hear snatches
of tales told in the flattest of cadences:
The
wrong restaurant in Spain
The
slapping of a woman by a policeman in Iran, the sighting of a demonstration on
a bus in London,
The
rescue of a frog by a dad, the buying of a white bike.
Shorn
experiences die amidst the paraphernalia of wire and machine.
Later, a
kneeling woman cradles a television.
Now Joan
Crawford commands me. Gosh that lipstick is red!
In a
white dress by a tiny piano with a bright brown backdrop I hear her say
‘You
can’t make me marshall.’
Is the dialogue of film the best line?
A
wondrous moment! All the dust from the hoover is blown upwards catching the
light in a golden cloud!
It lands
on the faces of the women below and they don’t wipe it off!
I am
pleased to hear their breathing through the megaphones.
Get
curious and find out their names. Blood and temper of life will flood back. Get
furious.
Hi Rosalind
ReplyDeleteI have just two quick things to say:
I loved this, and
keep it up.
I'm increasingly interested in the idea of responding to theatre not in straightforward critical prose but with art inspired by art and this is a lovely instance of that. Please let me know if you start publishing regularly, I'd love to keep reading. Cheers, maddy
Dear Rosalind
ReplyDeleteI loved this too. So interesting, from the perspective of one writer, to read the perspective of another. What is also intriguing is that I always say that my work has the structure of a poem, not just textually but visually also. Thank you for such a rich and thought prooking response.